Your music is really interesting
I like how boldly you merge seemingly unconventional elements together. You take the basic standard framework of a genre, like in this case, dnb - the drums are crisp, the breaks are appropriately spaced, there is variety in the fills and the sort of energy you expect from dnb.
The little delayed motif feels very consistent throughout the song, and there probably would have been just too much of it, if not for all the other fun harmonic stuff that gets layered with it, as well as the brief pause for when the vocal bits come in, there's some nice contrast.
It feels very progressive. The harmonies are super open, and it's non-standard, which might turn some people off, I guess, but that's what's fresh about this. The composition feels so cohesive as a whole, especially given the title.
It is lacking bass, though. Fans of genre conventions could be a bit disappointed, but otherwise the production is quite good. Albeit, that huge hallkick with delay is pretty loud, so it might be clipping.
Basically, I thought this was really well done, and I like your style!
I try to merge a lot of different aspects of music to create a song. I don't really put any planning when I create a song. I create sounds and patterns then add a beat(dubstep,dnb,hiphop,etc) such as dnb. And build from there. I actually had to build this song off another unfinished project. About the bass issue, I really really thought about adding "bass" into this song but.. I was looking for more of a gentle touch to this song. There is bass... but very little haha. And mostly coming from the pads. I really tried to make the drums flow with the atmosphere of the song. And that echoing synth that is used throughout the song... I have no idea why but I'm just in love with it. I'm using it in other tracks as well just because it sounds so unique to me, and i can manipulate it so easily. I will admit there might be some parts of this song that might turn people off but I really made it in the way I personally wanted it to be.
I really appreciate your review O.N., and I'm glad you liked how it turned out!!
pretty sweet, these are my kind of sounds!
my favorite thing is the slow n' subtle portamento lead, probably would enjoy more of that sorta thing. the other layers you've got going on complement everything fairly nicely
there's good contrast between sections in terms of instruments and rhythm, it's just too bad that the harmonic progression is so stale and never really changes
feels like the pauses between the chord hits in the breaks sections could benefit from some kind of further shaping, like some reversed snare type fx or sidechained noise or even small bits of filter automation, I'm not sure though
percussion is nice and crisp, but gets repetitive; the resulting dance feel is perhaps a little too explicit in my opinion. the four-on-the-floor is strong in this one
generally good build-ups and structure, quite enjoyable, but still ends up dragging on because of the redundant harmony I mentioned
hm, when it drops out at 2:18, probably would feel better if there was more lingering delay/verb on that last bit to make the transition less abrupt, but that might be a personal preference (well, all critique is personal preference, tbh)
I would maybe like to hear something with this type of sound/production, but more experimental in nature, I think that would be fun and enjoyable
Sounds quite nice!
A bit simple in its construction, but thematically very appropriate. Too short, imo, but could fit very well into certain visual projects.
Personally, I am not an avid fan of military/march style music, but I just like the work that you do!
Hey there! Long time no see. Glad you liked the concept. I definitely will expand this and overwork the details. But i had to hurry because i have to finish another piece urgently - a jazz piano tune :D Thanks a lot for leaving your thoughts here.
Best wishes and merry christmas!
piano bits really make it stand out and sound classy, grace notes ftw!
ok, so, in the beginning I thought, "yeah, this has the standard ZipZipper creepy vibe, very well mastered, clear sounds, and generally kinda light and circusy", but then at 0:43 it got terrifying. that was a transition I wasn't expecting. really cool dark percussion in that section. vocal effects from there onward were quite effective, without being too in-your-face. the humming bit at the very end was kinda lolz though, is that even part of the song? well, I haven't even watched the video yet, but congrats on this one! it really has a lot of evil evil energy, like, supa intense.
The end humming happens over the credits, but I consider it a benign appendage to the piece.
would you mind revealing what about the production/mixing is particularly new/unique here, because I'm honestly curious
the tempo automations are fairly obvious, if not rather extreme. personally, I like them. I think you've honed this style to DEATH, hah
that is to say, as far as creepy circus music goes, this is top notch
it totally has that old record tint to it, perhaps due to the tempo automation, and some of the extraneous noise, I think it works pretty well
To death indeed. I won't tire of it until the entire world is cirque madness. I'm proud of what I love. Well...I guess it doesn't matter what I did if you didn't notice any difference. It's even very minute to me, but a bit of an improvement. I guess I was just trying to get a little clearer mix that in turn made the sound fuller/louder.
I really enjoy your jazz piano works, particularly the live feel you bring to your tracks
SkyeWintrest has touched on a lot of relevant things that I agree with, if being a little bit picky
I did not think any of the sounds were jarring at all (besides maybe, the gong, a little, but honestly, if SkyeWintrest hadn't zeroed in on that, I probably wouldn't have payed much attention to it), and I just love jazz, conceptually, plus not all jazz is this smooth. it can be kind of terrible and boring in general, and this is definitely not terrible and boring
As you may know, I do a lot of purely electronic music, so this kind of thing really tickles my fancy, as it is quite outside of that realm, and certainly worth much recognition
Hey there! Thanks a lot for leaving your thoughts here - glad you liked the piece. I have been inactive for a quite long time and i hope to get more time for musics and NG in the near future again. I have bought lots of plugins etc. but did not even have the time to test them :/
I really like your electro songs - especially submerged lights. I wish i would understand just a little bit of creating this kind of music. My knowledge of synths etc is still very low --> what the heck is an oscillator? :D Someday i want to change this and hope to become acquainted with it.
Thanks a lot for your review - i will review one of your works soon!
sweep lp swells
it's a very pronounced effect, and pretty interesting
the arps complement the porta saw quite well
the sounds themselves have a simple/basic lo-fi feel to them, which is appropriate for video game genre, but the reverb smooths them out a bit, which, in my opinion, is better than the dry video game feel (I lean towards trancy sounds)
percussion is very down-beat/chill
Thank you for the well written review O.N :D
I'm always a fan of unconventional meters, and electronic music definitely doesn't have enough triple meter, so points for that
I'd say, vary up the chord progression, since the bass goes up and down between those two notes for the entire song, but on the other hand, it does add to the atmosphere, along with the waltz feel. It's like a constant lull, like you're out at sea with no shore in sight.
some parts could use volume re-balancing, such as the spot at 0:49 - the main instrument seems too loud.
I liked the guitar-ish sound later on, it was pretty fitting, yet subtle. good volume on that
create new content whenever you have time, it's one of the clearest ways to improve at anything!
pretty funky what you got here, and the sounds and bits are spot on - truly characteristic of the combo of genres you've got going on
the glide on that one synth was pretty sexy
maybe too much of the stutter glitching stuff for my taste
the ending was a treat
Thanks for the great review, dude! Glad you enjoyed it, and it's a relief to hear you dug the ending as well, since I thought I overdid it initially, but stuck with it. I actually agree that the glitchy stuff was a bit much. I might tweak it later this week if I find the time, tone down some of the syncopations. Again, much appreciated!
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