OcularNebula's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Offworld]

This is a super sweet track and totally deserves to be called a piece of art. Very interesting to listen to - it goes this way and that. Nice instrument choice and variety. The style kinda reminds me a bit of An Endless Sporadic.

Twone responds:

Thanks!

[Hurt (Prex feat. Eshar)]

pretty good

I like the lfo sweeps. The instruments, chord progression, and melody capture the feeling well. The sample could be a bit louder. This is up to artistic interpretation, but you could have the music fade out at the end while the sample plays (kinda like in the beginning). Otherwise, it feels empty. The whole point is to integrate the sample into the music, not have one play after the other.

PainasaurusRex responds:

Thank you for the review, the volume of the sample was one thing that was brought up to me from other people, I'll definitely bring it up, and update this. Also, I'll see what I can do about the end with keeping something going it's not just her talking. Thank you :D

[Your New Pop Icon (WIP2)]

facepalm

I wrote a review for your previous submission, not realizing that it was an earlier version of this

The intro is a lot better, the pads are nice. Bass panning was not a bad idea, but the bass sound itself is still lacking something. Is the panning supposed to stay on the left at 1:34?

PainasaurusRex responds:

Thank you for your review first of all.

As far as the bass, I completely agree with you, it's difficult for some reason for me to get the bass just right, powerful, but not overpowering, and some how epic. Also, I will be working on rhythm variations, just laying out the song and seeing what people think. So thanks again for the review, I greatly appreciate it. Oh, and as far as the panning getting stuck on the left, that would be a mistake, I'll look into it, FL studio has issues with that some times.

[Aquasisauqa]

eerie

I realized this was a loop only after a few of replays in. It's strange. The harmony seems to be major, but the sound of the synth playing the melody is anxious and foreboding. The short poem in the description really accompanies this well. Without being too specific you have captured the disposition most of us have regarding the end of our lives. Mysterious, unwanted, yet inevitable.

RawGreen responds:

thanks for the translation n_n

[Wet Dream]

vocoder!

This is pretty unique. I like it.

RawGreen responds:

I agree, it is unique. Thank you very much <3

[the Never Changing Future]

sweet

I am a sucker for samples. Overall, very cool composition of sounds.

RawGreen responds:

Hey, thanks!

[Too Many Mushrooms]

I like how the title is a pun

this is crazy intense! the idea is pretty creative and you incorporated it really well, too!

CrackMasterK responds:

Thanks, Hope I can come up with some more for you to listen to ^_^